Fiction Services

Beta Reading

A full-manuscript reader's perspective, focusing on the experience of reading your story.

I'll look at:

  • Plot and pacing

  • Characters and relationships

  • Engagement and readability

  • Where the story shines

  • Where the story may lose momentum

  • Overall reader reaction

You'll receive: a detailed written feedback

report with honest, constructive observations.

From A$75

First Chapter Feedback

Perfect if you're at the beginning of a novel and want to know whether your opening is doing its job.

I'll look at:

  • The opening hook

  • Character introduction

  • Pacing

  • Clarity

  • Voice and tone

  • Whether the chapter creates a reason to keep reading

You'll receive: focused written feedback on your first chapter.

A$45

For writers looking for more focused big-picture story feedback rather than a traditional beta read.

I'll look at:

  • Plot and structure

  • Pacing

  • Character development

  • Story arc

  • Areas that may need strengthening

  • The overall reading experience

You'll receive: practical, developmental-style feedback focused on the story as a whole.

From A$150

Manuscript & Story Feedback

Genres I Specialise In

I particularly enjoy reading and providing feedback on:

Fantasy · Romance · Dark Romance · Fantasy Romance · New Adult

I’m always open to discussing other genres too, so if you’re unsure whether your project is a good fit, feel free to get in touch.

Not sure which service is right for you?
Tell me a little about your project and I'll help you choose!

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